Post by Chemical_Insanity on Aug 30, 2013 4:32:42 GMT
So, I have this story, Kami, and for the most part it looks good. Rae has been helping me work out the kinks, and of course I have some other lovely people reading it as well. But now I want to see what you guys think. Am I doing okay? Did I miss any MORE grammar mistakes? (I just spent an hour adding details and fixing the crap my screwy eyes missed.) Please let me know, because I want to make this story as good as possible, both for the Wattys and for myself. I'm hoping to enter the Watty Awards for some recognition, and get more opinions... But I also want to see the populous's general feedback of the story. If people don't like it here... then they won't like it in the real world.
Anyway... I've been talking too much now... So yeah. A critique of Kami would be fantastic from you people. Thanks!
Chemical_Insanity: I'm scared, honestly. I don't really have friends... And none of them are in ANY of my classes this year. We checked.But I'm terrified of being social and so... Yeah. I'm not a social person... I don't make friends.
Aug 30, 2013 4:59:04 GMT
ssleep: No I completely understand you. I'm not that social myself. When I am slightly social with people I am barely friends with I say stupid things that embarrass me and talk too much.
Aug 30, 2013 5:00:06 GMT
ssleep: Plus, there are many people in my grade I'm scared of
Aug 30, 2013 5:00:19 GMT